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 The Crippled Swinger

Joined: Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:22 pm
Posts: 2
Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:52 pm
I got on the swing,millions of people wanting to see me go oh-so high.I did.But I was going high,well sort of,when I slid off.Wanting to save my tailbone from an umtimley death,I tried to move..I was so high up,I flipped in the air,and turned sideways because of the wind.I slammed on the ground.
 
I woke up,and my mom said somehow I'd only broke my wrist,arm,and foot and twisted my ankle on my non-broken foot.It was a miracle how I wasn't pailized.I asked my mom that,and I wasn't.
 
And I don't swing anymore.

Lanie

Loves Cousin Bob Show,made by my friends

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 Re: The Crippled Swinger
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Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:47 am
Posts: 7216
Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:46 pm
Aww, that's depressing. I can't imagine breaking that many bones at once... my cousin broke his arm jumping off a swing back when I was little, so I've basically been prohibited from ever doing it myself.

But anyway, that's really sad. How long ago was this?


~Cavy

"What came first, the light or the dark?"




 Re: The Crippled Swinger
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Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
Posts: 2025
Wed Jan 30, 2013 12:15 am
I HOPE YOU GET HEALED. FROM, dreamtimepink9



 Re: The Crippled Swinger
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Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:55 am
How long ago was that? I've only broken my arm so far in my life.



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