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 The Crystal Sword, Dawn of Darkness, Part I
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:29 pm
Eight-year-old Keth dived beneath a glistening wave in the Sea of White Sands. He shot back up from the water's depths, sputtering and laughing. This is the best day ever, he thought, diving into the Ocean again, and digging his hands into the sandy floor of it. Today was his birthday, and he would always celebrate by swimming in the Sea. As Keth sat in the Sea of White Sands, he watched rainbow-colored fish swim by, and golden seaweed swaying back and forth like grass being played with by the wind.



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