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 The day I scottered on the ramp at the car wash
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Joined: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:36 pm
Posts: 7
Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:01 pm

One time i was helping my dad with a car then i took a BRAKE

and i saw some of my friends Their names are Tate (...) and I dont remember the others

so I took my scotter and ride with them it was so much fun then i went down the ally and went to the carwash i went on the wooden floor thingy then my mom saw me and called me over to the house then i found a toy and i toled my mom i was lucky and i keep rideing my scotter

but stayed away from the car wash then the next day i was riding my scotter then i heard Tate

at the carwash so i went over there Tate told me about the ramp at the car wash i tried to jump off the ramp with my scotter but i fell bad and i went home  I did not know that my leg

was bleeding intill i saw it at my house and both of my legs was bleeding just so you know then the next day i fell bad again but the good news is it was not bleeding so my story has kinda a happy ending The endblush




 Re: The day I scottered on the ramp at the car wash
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Joined: Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:59 pm
Posts: 18
Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:17 am

Your story is um, quick.




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