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 The Day that Changed My Life Forever

Joined: Mon Jul 18, 2011 1:22 pm
Posts: 6
Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:20 pm

I was only 9 years old,and my sister was 11.My mom,my sister,my 7 year old brother,and I piled into the car to go to the airport to see my dad,who was in Massetchus for a week for his job.We were driving on the highway and a  pickup truck was driving crazily.Seconds Later,The truck had slammed into side my brother was sitting in.We all went to the hospital and my mom,My sister,and I were fine.My  brother had died.I lost my 7 year old brother.He would of been 9 this year.It's been two years.
It kills me to talk about it.
I'm sorry its not the best.
Nathan we love you!

*too sad to post singoff*

 Re: The Day that Changed My Life Forever

Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:10 pm
Posts: 59
Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:31 am

Oh God, I'm so sorry. RIP Nathan. Do you believe in heaven? I'm sure he'll have gone there. broken heart angel

 Re: The Day that Changed My Life Forever

Joined: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:11 pm
Posts: 505
Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:54 am

That makes me sad. . . RIP Nathanbroken heart  I hope he would have gone to heaven. . .

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