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 The Drama of Shakespeare School-Part 1

Joined: Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:27 pm
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Sat Oct 29, 2011 10:59 am
Part 1


HELEN sits on a metal bench in front of the school. Bus breaks HISS and kids around her TALK and LAUGH.

HELEN is writing in purple gel pin on a page in an old, beat up notebook.

School bell RINGS (from a distance)

HELEN closes her notebook. We see the cover. It reads HER LIFE IN PICTURES: THE SCRIPT.

She stands and turns to face the school building. CUT to engraving above the door. It reads SHAKESPEARE MIDDLE SCHOOL in large letters.

(To herself)

Back to work.

 Re: The Drama of Shakespeare School-Part 1

Joined: Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:13 pm
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:48 pm

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 Re: The Drama of Shakespeare School-Part 1

Joined: Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:50 pm
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Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:58 pm
hello u r doin an awesome job on your story. (...) it is a great place to write stories. you need to make sure you use, correct puncuation, conversations that interest readers, and a small mystery to make the readers wonder. i hope this helps you. and also make sure you add some surprises as you go. i hope this helps!!

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