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 The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please read

Joined: Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:55 pm
Posts: 12
Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:44 am

dear people of this thing what ever,

i need to know if this would be a good idea for a book and i also need help with the title:

okay this is how it goes:

there is a girl who's father has disappeared and seems to have been kidnapped.  there is a boy who's healer/teacher has been killed under mysterious circumstances, he now roams villages learning how to sneak and is awesome with a bow.  the accedently meet when she mistakes him for a night creeper (similar to a goblin but more huminoid).  he decides he'll help her find her father.  he finds that she can't bleed but only oozes sap but won't talk about it.  the girl finds out he is a nature healer ( some one who heals with the Life Force (called Sskarmin).  then they meet a man who is blind but can see through the Sskarmin. he says that she is Claimed and he is marked.  he can't tell anything else but says he'll help them. tangled lies and traps (blixes and shape shifters will do any thing to get The Girl Who Bleeds Sap) plus one very mysterious father. 

if you need more information please ask!

           alone forever,

               Lone Light     

 Re: The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please

Joined: Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:43 pm
Posts: 11
Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:10 pm
That is definitely a good idea for a book. Go for it.

 Re: The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please

Joined: Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:55 pm
Posts: 80
Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:28 pm
Its a very clever idea, and i leik (not like, leik) it: but (and perhaps I'm being a hypocrite), why are we running our ideas by others instead of just GOING for it? We're essentially pandering to our audiance, and if you just pulled that idea out of some bucket (how lewd!) and believed it was garbage, while everyone else thought it was awesome, you won't have a fun time writing it, and that's kind of the point: to create something fun. So while you have a consensus of "it's great, go hogwild", what about YOU? What do YOU think? Is it the greatest thing since Nintendo? (because we all know that everything great in this world came BEFORE Nintendo. But it's still pretty great.) So, umm, how do you feel about it? (Please, please, PLEASE answer me... or I really will be a forum killer! D:{ aND, uHH, i DONT THINK i, rEALLY WANT THAT,)

 Re: The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please

Joined: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:57 pm
Posts: 11
Wed Jun 20, 2012 6:45 pm
Go for it. Sounds good. Lookin' forward to it. Post it soon.

 Re: The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please

Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:17 pm
Posts: 7691
Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:34 am
go for it, lonelight! It sounds like an awesome story. Probably a sory you should write AND publish.

 Re: The Elders: book one: Sap is Thicker Than Blood. please

Joined: Fri Oct 05, 2012 7:08 pm
Posts: 22
Mon Oct 08, 2012 1:24 am
lonelight, I would like to ask u,if u are intersted in a writing contest ? i also on fan fiction page of harry potter, i have a newspaper i need help on . if u replie 1st uget your pickin job. sorry if i sound desprate, ur such a good writer and i'd like to see u in 1 of my clubs and i think u would win the contest and would do really well in reviewing hp books and threads . PLEASE REPLY:]:[:]:]:].

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