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What should Mr. John do?
Poll ended at Sun May 24, 2015 10:31 pm
A. Suspend Sofia for being to loud. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
B. Ex-spell Sofia. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
C. Give her another chance. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
D. Have a meeting with her parents. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
E. Give her a exact copy of her other pencil. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 The End Of The World!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:21 pm
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Tue May 19, 2015 10:31 pm

 One day Sofia said "I lost my favorite pencil! The world  is ending!" " Oh stop being so dramatic!!' exclaimed Paul. "It's just a pencil."  Abby said. Sofia started running around the room like CRAZY screming " I LOST MY PENCIL!" In a few seconds the principal, Mr. John, comes in and says " What is with all this noise?!?!" When Mr. John said that Paul and Abby pointed at Sofia. Mr. John questioned "What makes you do all this?" " I lost my FAVORITE pencil!" Sophia screamed. "The worl is ending!" "What to do what to do?" Mr. John stated.

 




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