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Did you like the prologue and will you read the rest when it comes?
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 The Forgotten Spirits, a book series i'm making
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Joined: Sun Nov 24, 2013 5:03 pm
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Sat Jan 10, 2015 5:26 pm

.                                                              Prologue

Many millennia ago, mystical creatures ruled over our land of Pyro (Pie-roh). So few had powers beyond explanation. Those few came together, creating an academy for those of powers. Because soon, they all had to go into exile for safety. Many believed that seven mysticals could save them, give or take millennium. Through the years of training the students, fear overtook their minds, erasing the hope of having freedom back. Soon enough, only the creators of the Celestial Academy knew of the prophecy. Only could they find the seven and train them. The Academy continued searching, teaching all mysticals the elders could find. Fallen angels, elves, wizards, fairies, witches and much more come and master there individual powers, knowing they all must defend their world. Soon, thefallen angels come, not knowing who they are

I hope you like my prologue to The Forgotten Spirits!!!




 Re: The Forgotten Spirits, a book series i'm making
new

Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:31 pm
Posts: 19
Sat Feb 07, 2015 5:03 pm

This book is kinda starting out like the deep blue waterfire saga by Jennifer Donnelly I really like the prologue But it sounds like a layout then a Prologue though If you could make it longer it would be better too. But I would read it if it came out in bookstores I hope your book gets published!laugh                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           sorry for the run on sentences!!




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