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 The Loki-Odin-Thor Fight Show
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Joined: Wed Jun 11, 2014 7:09 pm
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Thu Jun 12, 2014 7:03 pm

-epic soundtrack (goes like: dun--dun dun dun--dun dun DUN!!!)

Me: And welcome to the, uh, Funny Show! Here is our guest, uh...Loki.

Loki: -in his oh so nice accent- Hi.

Thor: HEY HEY HEY WHERE'S MY PART!? -throws hammer-

Me: Calm down, Mr. Big Heavy Hammer. -looks at sky and realizes Odin is next to me-

Me: AHH ODIN DON'T SNEAK UP ON ME GOSH.

Odin: -in puppy-dog voice- I'm sorry...

Me: Oh, dear lord. You're ODIN! MAN UP!

Loki: -stil in accent- Hey, hey, hey. This show is about me, okay? Because I'm just fancy. -satisfied smile-

-Thor and Odin tackle Loki-

Me: Uhhhhhh... That's all we have today, folks. -to Thor and Odin- Stop tackling people who are related to you!

Thor: He's adopted. (side-note: recognize this line?)

Odin: Extremely adopted.

Thor: Yeah, like so adopted he barely is adopted at all.

-Odin gives him a confused look-

Me: Dd--uh. Look, Thor, your friends!

Thor: MY FRIENDS! (side-note: recognize this line, too?)

THE END

 

Look, I was bored. I honestly don't think it'll make sense if you haven't watched Thor, especially the really funny parts, but just bear with me, okay?

 

Also, if you have seen Thor...WHAT IS LOKI'S ACCENT!? It's like Scottish or something. Anyways... I'm so random. :)

 

From A Girl Who's Siggy is in the Making




 Re: The Loki-Odin-Thor Fight Show
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Joined: Sun Feb 28, 2016 1:03 pm
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 8:28 pm

 One of the best talk shows I've ever read! I think you should do Captain America and Iron Man talk show too!yesyes




 Re: The Loki-Odin-Thor Fight Show
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Joined: Sun Nov 06, 2016 9:27 pm
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Sat Nov 19, 2016 6:17 pm

FINALLY!!!! SOMEONE WHO LOVES THOR AS MUCH AS I DO!

 




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