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 The Night of The Ducks

Joined: Thu Jul 14, 2016 11:12 pm
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Thu Jul 21, 2016 11:36 pm

One morning, in the kingdome of Entia woke prince Alaric. When he awoke he summoned his servants, and they brought him breakfast. "Summon my sister", he said, "And tell her to do as the river". He said, "Do as the river" was the waterfowl way of saying "Be swift". His sister finaly arived, "Hello Monia", he said. She sat next to him on the bed, "How are your feathers"? She asked looking at them, "There fine", he said "A bit uncomfortable though". He said, looking down a his shiny feathers, he had his back and wing feathers recently coated in iron and sharpend, they were his weponds.

 Re: The Night of The Ducks

Joined: Thu Jul 14, 2016 11:12 pm
Posts: 27
Mon Aug 01, 2016 3:55 pm

I know It's kind of short but it's not finished yet.

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