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Who do you think is the best character? Do AFTER you read!
Chloe 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Alex 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Julie 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Haley 100%  100%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 1
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 The Prophecy
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Joined: Thu May 14, 2015 1:52 pm
Posts: 20
Thu Jun 16, 2016 3:19 pm

Here's my prolauge please reply. I don't care if you say it's bad, just please don't go all like,OMG! This is the worst book ever!, because that will really break my heart. Hope you like it!

 

                                                          THE PROPHECY 

                           To the Stars

" NO! " screamed Nick. " Don't leave me, Araina. Please, " said Nick. " My time has come, " said Araina. " Promise me you'll take care of them. Chloe, Alex, Julie and Haley. Take Chloe, the others have come." Three people walked in and said, " Mistress."Araina nodded. And she passed. " NO!"




 Re: The Prophecy
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Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 270
Fri Jun 17, 2016 7:04 am

I was typing a death scene and it almost broke my heart. It was the same thing here.

-Dragoncrown485




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