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 The Reason It's Messed Up
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Joined: Thu Mar 20, 2014 11:17 am
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Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:40 am
I step into my third grade classroom. I look around. Oh, yeah, "I" is me, Nya Cassandra Lily. I notice a new kid. Collin Greene. He looked nice. Later that year. I proved the saying "looks are deceiving" true. Another new kid Helena Crayn. I knew we were gonna be best friends. I also proved "trust your gut" true. We were best friends. But that's the reason it's messed up.



 Re: The Reason It's Messed Up
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Joined: Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:24 pm
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Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:53 pm
Keep going! It's great! :)



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