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 Things I Miss (Original Song)
regular_visitor

Joined: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:51 pm
Posts: 179
Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:52 pm
Feel free to make any corrections!
 

Verse 1:

Stroll on the beach

Hand in hand

The feeling of love

and the soft sand

The salty wind

blows against my face

and all these memories soon will be erased.

 

In the city park

on the swings

your pushing me

making me feel like I've grown wings.

Than you pulled me close

enough to see

that you had a big surprise awaiting me

 

Chorus:

These memories

That I will miss

Will not come back if I sit here

and reminisce.

Your shining eyes

Your sweet smile

Where'd they go?

They disappeared. Disappeared. Disappeared.

 

Verse 2:

I see your face

Lit with a grin

fills the empty space

I've been hiding within.

This is how

I'll remember you

And not the way left me and  split me in two.

 

Chorus:

 These memories

That I will miss

Will not come back if I sit here

and reminisce.

Your shining eyes

Your sweet smile

Where'd they go?

They disappeared. Disappeared. Disappeared.

 

Verse 3:

The warmth of you hands

The warmth in your eyes

The warmth in your smile

Was it all a big lie?

The look on your face

At 3 In the morning

I should have taken it

As a warning

But I didn’t.

And I miss you.

 

Chorus 2:

And these things

Are things I miss.

Our first dance

And our first kiss.

Your faded jeans

Your soft hair

And I’m wishing now

That you would just appear.

 

 

Chorus:

 These memories

That I will miss

Will not come back if I sit here

and reminisce.

Your shining eyes

Your sweet smile

Where'd they go?

They disappeared. Disappeared. Disappeared.

 

Verse 4:

These things

That I miss

They will not come back.



 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:45 pm
Posts: 277
Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:54 pm
I think it's time that somebody replied to your song and I'd just like to say I liked it. :robothappy: I especially liked the chorus.

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 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)
regular_visitor

Joined: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:51 pm
Posts: 179
Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:20 pm
Thanks!



 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)

Joined: Mon May 30, 2011 4:11 pm
Posts: 13
Wed Aug 31, 2011 5:00 pm
cool. i like it.



 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)
visitor

Joined: Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:22 pm
Posts: 32
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:52 pm
thats really good my name is jayden:smileyindifferent:



 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:45 pm
wanna enter my song contest?



 Re: Things I Miss (Original Song)
new

Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Posts: 41
Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:07 pm
That's really good!



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