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 this needs a title
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Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Sun Feb 15, 2015 9:23 pm

I have no clue what the title for this book should be, but here is the prolouge and part of chapter 1:

   PROLOUGE

     The baby was left at the doorway, everything cold around her. They didn't find her until the next morning. She laughed, though her face was blue of the cold. They qyickly brought her in, for she could die of the cold, and they were kind people. They would do anything to let her live, try as hard as they could.

CHAPTER 1

     The child was young when she first read. She read on her own, Dickens and Wilder and many more.

     The parents had "adopted" her, the baby left in a basket with nearly no warmth, the bab who was blue but still happy. Her name was Yvette, or so it said on the note.

     The note read;

"Take care of Yvette,"

and that was all. Nothing more, nothing less. Four simple words that meant everything to the girl. It was the most important thing to her besides books. She would do anything to find them.
 

Again, this need a title! Thanks!




 Re: this needs a title
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Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:47 pm

qyickly is supposed to be quickly

 




 Re: this needs a title
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Joined: Fri May 29, 2015 12:36 am
Posts: 10
Fri May 29, 2015 1:50 am

Hi, emeralddolphin1549! I'm literally taking the words right out of your mouth here- you should call it, 'Take Care of Yvette,' since you said those words meant everything to her. 




 Re: this needs a title
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Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:45 pm
Posts: 21
Tue Jun 30, 2015 11:36 pm

that is an awesome idea!! smiley




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