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Joined: Sat May 21, 2016 4:03 pm
Posts: 1
Sat May 21, 2016 4:32 pm

I feel like I'm a bug under a microscope 

I ask can I take a break

They just responded with nope

For goodness sake is this the world we're really living in

Love the sinner hate the sin

Was it really a sin to be different from everyone else 

To be unique in my own way

Because I'm alienated that's how I feel everyday

I have feelings inside

Don't want my feelings to divide

I've got a brain

Please do not go insane

My IQ is 140 percent

You've got a head that is as hard as cement

It doesn't matter what race I am or whatever religion

'Cause trust me it wasn't really my decision

I know many many others that feel the same

They go to school walk around having so much shame

And I know how you feel

I wonder what's their deal 

But the problem is that my normal is your weird

Is this all I ever feared? 

Because your ver smart 

You've got a nice heart

The problem is that my normal is your weir

By now the sorrow should've disappeared.

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