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 Twice Upon a Time
rookie_visitor

Joined: Tue May 04, 2010 4:58 pm
Posts: 43
Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:49 pm

Chapter 1

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        Our story begins with Delsin Mark.  Possibly the dreamiest guy on the planet.  Who's single.  Not that he'd be interested in me.  I'm just the sideshow, off in her own little world of geek.  But I wouldn't say I don't have any friends.  I've got Hadley.  But thats about it.  Besides, half the school district is in love with him.  He'd never choose me.

        Anyway, Delsin is known for his talent in acting.  He always gets the male lead.  This years play, Bye Bye Birdie, is gonna be amazing.  And it's a well known fact that he's trying out for Albert.  And I have no doubt that he'll get it.  So, I've come up with a plan.  Albert and Rosie are kind of an item aren't they.  So, I get Rosie, and Delsin will have to fall in love with me. As simple as that.  Only, there's one tiny detail.  Tori Landez.

         She's the female Delsin, to state it bluntly.  And she's after Delsin.  She always gets the female lead in the plays, and is also trying out for Rosie.  This is a problem. 

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 Re: Twice Upon a Time
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:59 am
Posts: 593
Thu May 03, 2012 7:28 pm
Awesome story! I can't wait to hear more!!!



 Re: Twice Upon a Time
new

Joined: Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:43 pm
Posts: 11
Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:46 am
This is really good. It keeps my attention really well through the second paragraph. After that the all explanation/no action gets a little monotonous, but you did a really good job pulling that off in the first two paragraphs. Keep on this story.



 Re: Twice Upon a Time
new

Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2015 3:06 pm
Posts: 6
Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:14 pm

Two words: Post. More.




 Re: Twice Upon a Time
new

Joined: Thu Mar 26, 2015 10:54 pm
Posts: 3
Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:14 pm

Sound awesome! Post more!




 Re: Twice Upon a Timehi
new

Joined: Wed Dec 02, 2015 4:10 pm
Posts: 3
Wed Dec 02, 2015 4:08 pm

hi




 Re: Twice Upon a Time
regular_contributor

Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:17 pm
Posts: 7691
Fri Dec 11, 2015 12:30 am

cool story, I like it.




 Re: Twice Upon a Time
new

Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 270
Sat Jun 25, 2016 7:28 pm

To quote from Dragondusk767:

Two words: Post. More.

Need I say more?

-Dragoncrown485




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