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 Twilight Comedy
rookie_visitor

Joined: Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:29 pm
Posts: 23
Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:08 pm
I'm not a fan but i do not want to offend fans.But if you reply do not ramble on about your Werewolf Hair Grow cream  or your Vampire Sparkly Fangs or even your Bella Bubblicious gum.This is the first part of new moon.Here it is:

Alice:IT'S TIME IT'S TIME!
Bella:I get it!Quit or it's time for a black eye.
Edward hands knife with bow.
Bella:Ow I cut myself!
Alice & Edward:Smooth.
Jasper growls and snarls in a geeky way
Edward stands in front of Bella obviously bored.
Emmett ties rope around Jasper's wrist while holding a donkey.
Emmett:Follow the pretty donkey!
Bella stares at cut.
Carisle:I AM A DOCTOR!Good always conquers evil!
Bella:Dude nothing to do with this.
Carisle: When there a will there's a way?
Bella:Forget it.Can i just have a bandage?Surely u can handle that.
Rosalie cackling:You could but I used them all for tape!
Alice:I have a vision!We are at a restaurant eating very medium rare steak!
Edward:Ooook?
Jacob pops out:Can i win pretty please!?
Edward:Why are we fighting over her?
Bella coughs loudly.
Jacob while throwing sack of cough drops:Need a cough drop?
THE END!
ALICE TEAM!
I SAID THE END
MIKE TEAM!
never mind.


Warning:Your computer will explode in 10 seconds.
 



 Re: Twilight Comedy
regular_visitor

Joined: Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:57 am
Posts: 229
Fri Apr 02, 2010 5:57 pm
This is soo funny!! I'm not even offended!! P.S. My Bella Bubblicious gum is soo bubblicious!



 Re: Twilight Comedy
visitor

Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:01 pm
Posts: 118
Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:29 pm
wow lol i love twilight and all but it is pretty stupid



 Re: Twilight Comedy

Joined: Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:07 pm
Posts: 8
Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:18 pm
Funny! Write mor cause all of a sudden it ends? Whats up with that? lol.
TEAM JACOB!
TEAM CLAPTON!
yea i shoud really stop writing now.
  Peace out! CLAPTON 4EVER



 Re: Twilight Comedy
visitor

Joined: Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:49 pm
Posts: 121
Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:06 am


_Paramorefan440674_ wrote:
I'm not a fan but i do not want to offend fans.But if you reply do not ramble on about your Werewolf Hair Grow cream  or your Vampire Sparkly Fangs or even your Bella Bubblicious gum.This is the first part of new moon.Here it is:

Alice:IT'S TIME IT'S TIME!
Bella:I get it!Quit or it's time for a black eye.
Edward hands knife with bow.
Bella:Ow I cut myself!
Alice & Edward:Smooth.
Jasper growls and snarls in a geeky way
Edward stands in front of Bella obviously bored.
Emmett ties rope around Jasper's wrist while holding a donkey.
Emmett:Follow the pretty donkey!
Bella stares at cut.
Carisle:I AM A DOCTOR!Good always conquers evil!
Bella:Dude nothing to do with this.
Carisle: When there a will there's a way?
Bella:Forget it.Can i just have a bandage?Surely u can handle that.
Rosalie cackling:You could but I used them all for tape!
Alice:I have a vision!We are at a restaurant eating very medium rare steak!
Edward:Ooook?
Jacob pops out:Can i win pretty please!?
Edward:Why are we fighting over her?
Bella coughs loudly.
Jacob while throwing sack of cough drops:Need a cough drop?
THE END!
ALICE TEAM!
I SAID THE END
MIKE TEAM!
never mind.


Warning:Your computer will explode in 10 seconds.
 



Awesome i do not like twilight i think it is a waste of time checkout my posts i am a hippie



 Re: Twilight Comedy
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:58 am
Posts: 319
Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:15 am
Hmmm i think i might need that werewolf haircream now lol!



 Re: Twilight Comedy
visitor

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:57 am

I love Paramore! :D FYI, my computer DID NOT explode!!! SO HA!!!

 

~IsisLovesCupcakes(;~




 Re: Twilight Comedy
new

Joined: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:13 am
Posts: 10
Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:30 am
LOL!!! Loved it!! I have read the books also and I thought they were pretty good!!!! Anyway thought that it was a pretty good joke!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Comedy!!!



 Re: Twilight Comedy
new

Joined: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:13 am
Posts: 10
Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:35 am
LOL!!!! I have read the books and they are pretty good!!!! Anyway Good joke!!!! :) Comedy!! I ment! :) LOL about warewolf haircream!!!!! !)



 Re: Twilight Comedy
new

Joined: Sat Aug 18, 2012 11:16 pm
Posts: 8
Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:49 pm
LOL LOL LOL I love it. Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D



 Re: Twilight Comedy
new

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:29 pm
Posts: 1
Mon Oct 29, 2012 11:58 pm
dud jacob is so cool



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