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 Unquie and whatever else.
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Joined: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:39 pm
Posts: 87
Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:16 pm

According to my mom I'm uniquie.

According to my friends I'm special

But to me, I'm diffrent. Strange, bizare quirky and errestic.

 

I've been diffrent then other people I know, I don't blow dry my hair, I comb it sometimes, I play a french horn sorta well, some of the clothes I wear I see on 4 year olds, I read for fun, I'm kinda chubby.

 

I'm not a popular girl, I'm well liked. I'm Funny and not afried to be diffrent. I guess being diffrent is a good thing. I will never be mistaken as someone else, I will not get legal in trouble and I'll proble gett into Ivy League Collage from all my reading.

 

According to my mom I'm uniquie.

According to my friends I'm special

But to me, I'm diffrent. Strange, bizare quirky and errestic, But I guess that's a good thing.

 

 

Being unquie is good, your diffrrent, special and whatever else you want to be. You won't be the one who was exsactly like the next all through school and ignored everything else and later became a bagger at Kroger. You are special, you are unquie.

 




 Re: Unquie and whatever else.
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Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 7:39 pm
Posts: 57
Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:32 pm
I really liked the title and the first few lines. Keep writing!



 Re: Unquie and whatever else.
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Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Posts: 41
Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:13 pm
I liked it. Keep Working. :)



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