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 untitled but really good please read (not the tittle)ch.3
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Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:31 pm
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Mon May 18, 2015 8:37 pm

Before I get started I just wanted to say I have a character sweepsteaks on the general discussion board so you guys can enter to be featured in my in my later chapters. It ends on June 1, 2015 12:00 EST time and I might push the time limit if I don't get many replies for full rules copy the web address below:

                          http://community.scholastic.com/character-sweepstakes-many-will-enter-two-will-win-t435894.html 

Now back to the story. It's kind of short like a paragragh but it's a cliffhanger but I hope you like it!cheeky    P.S one more thing if you don't like the story or saw some mistakes don't be to tell me in the comments. 

                                                                                                                          I was wearing sea foam green long sleeved shirt with a solid red knee length skirt although, it is not ideal for looking for parents, I think I can make it work. I search though the entire house for any belongings the BSUs might take away while I'm gone. I only take the family heirlooms (which are very few) and pack it into my portable baby blue suite case as I keep packing I hear a faint knocking noise an then I heard a voice "Mr. and Mrs. Carvante, Don't forget to pay the child fine if you don't pay your child is a goner in the orpanage or worse the frogotten city*, AND TRUST ME you don't your child there. That was the deep voice I reconzined any where. Our chatty BSU Chad Nocacki (no-keks-csi).

 

* formerly hungerlands

 

                     And that's all for now I hope you enjoyed itsmiley                                                                                                                                                                "If plan A dosen't work just remember there are 25 more letters in the alphabet"  

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 Re: untitled but really good please read (not the tittle)ch.
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Tue Jul 14, 2015 10:58 pm

Cool! Too bad about the speepstakes though, too late T_T




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