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 untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Mar 11, 2012 4:54 am
Posts: 3
Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:13 am

hey ppl!!!!!!!!!!

i wrote a story on a disabled boy who learns to talk and read w/ the help of his friend, but they are keeping it a surprise for his mom

 

i hope ill be able to type it up soon for u guy but idk im soooo busy so yeah

 

tell me what u think.....

PLEASE sugest titles....... i need one soooo bad 

<3me




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:21 pm
Posts: 168
Thu Mar 15, 2012 4:37 am

I have many ideas:

  • I learned how
  • surprise, mom
  • and some others that i'm questioning



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:53 am
Posts: 14
Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:42 pm

ooooooh.. interesting




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:13 pm
Posts: 2
Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:03 pm

 hi my name is Riley and i am a girl and i think the book should be a littel bit longer. so i think the book should be i need to know.

 

 

your new friend maby,

Riley




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:32 pm
Posts: 4
Sun Apr 08, 2012 5:39 pm

I have some:

* The Silent Secret

* The Secret Within the Silence

* Silent no more

* Dont Tell




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
Posts: 2025
Sun Jan 27, 2013 12:36 am
HOW ABOUT: "THE SPECIAL SECRET SURPRISE". FROM, dreamtimepink9



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:48 am
Posts: 25
Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:49 pm
Sounds like a great story! Okay, title options! Hmmm... lets see..... The Silent Suprise...neh.... Speechless Suprise.... None of those are too great... but use it if you want it! No credit needed. Ciao, Emma



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:51 pm
Posts: 3
Thu Apr 25, 2013 3:48 pm
I'm interested to read the story!! I think some good book titles would be: Best Mother's Day Present A Wish Come True for a Mom Special Surprise Hope it helped!!!



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:00 pm
Posts: 24
Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:05 pm
SILENCE TO SECRETS



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:45 am
Posts: 7
Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:58 am
I get stuck with story titles, too. What about: - The Hidden Gift - Making the Impossible, Possible - Goal Achieved - Nothing is Impossible - My Disabled Miracle Hope these help, authorgirl70



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Tue Aug 13, 2013 7:26 pm
Posts: 5
Tue Aug 13, 2013 8:02 pm
with the silence lies a secret



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Mon Aug 19, 2013 5:08 pm
With the Help of a Friend Disability Disembodied The Way it Went



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:18 pm
Posts: 6
Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:29 pm
how about all ends well? From, Grace



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Mon Oct 14, 2013 2:20 pm
Posts: 4
Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:04 am
What's the boy's name? How about... "Welcome (boy's name)" You would put the boy's name there ;)



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!

Joined: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:07 pm
Posts: 27
Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:36 am
it should be called the secret learning i mean it can be called the secret learning.



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Mon Jan 27, 2014 8:38 pm
Posts: 114
Tue Jan 28, 2014 1:05 am
Pick a working title and then as you write choose a phrase that relates to the overall them but maybe not in the plot and use that. Okay yeah I just realised no one is going to understand that.

Anyway, summerdawn28



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sat Feb 08, 2014 11:13 pm
Posts: 2
Sun Feb 09, 2014 7:12 pm
Title suggestions: New Ways Big Dream; Big Secret



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Sun Feb 16, 2014 3:16 am
Posts: 1
Sun Feb 16, 2014 3:49 am
the series could be called weird but wonderful if you want to write a sei=ries



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Mon May 12, 2014 10:35 pm
Posts: 4
Mon May 12, 2014 11:07 pm
I love the concept of the story. Maybe you could make the mom find out and she could be really mad that they were keeping such a big secret from her. Then the friend tells the mom that they were doing this for her and she gets all teary and happy and they hug and it's happily ever after except that the boy can't ever learn to read or write but the mom and the boy both realize that they are happy with what they have and the boy doesn't need to be able to talk or read, she will love him just the same. As far as titles go, finish the book first, then see what you come up with. Sometimes the story will have a mind of it's own and you will end up with an ending that is different than you expected. The ending will make a difference in the title.



 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu May 22, 2014 8:59 pm
Posts: 42
Tue May 27, 2014 8:34 pm

Great Idea. i have some names...

ok, so i dont have ideas, but when your dine the book, read through it and think about it. I just read a book called out of my mind, and its kinda the same idea. the title makes sense once you have read the book, so think about it




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Tue May 13, 2014 11:08 am
Posts: 16
Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:09 am

I agree wih creekclimbing11. I have also had this problem, (I have no idea for a a title for a story I'm writing right now actually.) so maybe you should just wait till you finish the story/book to decide. 

P.S. Out of My Mind is a great book, you should read it. 

brainyelf38smiley




 Re: untitled story- help!!!!!!!!!!!
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Joined: Thu May 22, 2014 8:59 pm
Posts: 42
Mon Jun 09, 2014 11:52 am

Hi! This kinda sounds like Out of My Mind. These are some names i came up with

  • Now and Then
  • Chit-Chat

I would chnge the perspective each chapter. So, Chapter 1-  in the boys perspective. Chapter 2- In the friends perspective. Keep writing this sounds really good!




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