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Author:  friendlymonkey10 [ Mon Jun 23, 2014 12:03 pm ]
Message subject:  Please read my poem, "Gone"

I hear her soothing hushed voice 

in the wind.

I can smell her rosy scent,

in the bloodshot roses.

I can feel the dampness of her hand 

on the wet pavement 

after it rains.

But,

I can't see her face

because she is gone.

I will never see her

because she is

dead!

She was the light admist all darkness

but now that all is lost.

I loathe the traps of death!


Author:  dolphinblue1406 [ Sun Aug 17, 2014 2:37 pm ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

awsome poems

 


Author:  catchingpizza60 [ Mon Feb 23, 2015 7:14 pm ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

that was a pretty good poem.


Author:  blackbiking830 [ Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:37 am ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

That pome was awsome!


Author:  cleverpenguin46 [ Mon Sep 28, 2015 2:03 am ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

Oh. My gosh.

That was amazing!!!!!!

That is so deep! loveit!


Author:  mermaidkitten288 [ Sun Dec 20, 2015 6:46 pm ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I is stunningly awesome. I'm copletely awstruck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Author:  wizardcobra430 [ Mon Dec 28, 2015 1:45 am ]
Message subject:  Re: Please read my poem, "Gone"

Dude the poem is really  good. it has awsome imagery. The only thing i would really change is slightly tone down the scarry endlaugh


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