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 Weard day chapter 1
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Joined: Mon May 16, 2016 8:44 pm
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Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:53 pm

Today at school I finished my math test. We had gym this morning, todays gym teatcher is the only female gym teacher in the whole school. She said that today we were going to play football I know right I was thinking oh know she didn't but unlucky she autuwally said it. I closed my eyes and prayed with plead please let this be  only a bad nightmare but as sad as it is to say it was realidy not fanacy( witch BTW i hoped it was).At school we worked on our books about our genuis hour topic, my book was about blogs. We started making our toys for the yonger kids to play with during indoor resses. I made a doll for kindergardeners, it is amed at girls but boys can play with it too.We had outdoor resses today. My friend Lana asked my BFF Lulu and I if we could help her with a bake sale. Of corce we said yes so we started thinking of diffrent cupcake flavours and toppings. We havn't thought about the frosting yet.Up I gotta go it is time for my dance lesson.




 Re: Weard day chapter 1
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Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
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Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:26 am

Uh...I dunno. I guess.




 Re: Weard day chapter 1
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Joined: Thu May 14, 2015 1:52 pm
Posts: 20
Sun Jun 12, 2016 1:42 pm

It's good so far, but you might want to look it over for spelling. No offense.

 

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