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 Weard Thing I did

Joined: Mon May 16, 2016 8:44 pm
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Tue May 17, 2016 8:59 pm

 After the pictures I had to use the bathroom so we snuck into a theater just to use the bathroom, for a theater the theater looked very plain there wasn't even a vending machine but there were chairs all over the place and assign it and out sheet though we also didn´t mark anything or leave any evidence that we were there. I think the actual theater was upstairs but the stairs were blocked and we didn't go that far (we also didn ´t steal anything), I was nervous that we were going to get caught and then mom thought of the crazy excuse that if we get caught well say where in a play here  and I said my brother and I are kids and mom said it could be a kids play ( but then I would need some acting lessons), then we  finished using the bathroom, stopped for a drink of water and got the heck out of there ALIVE. I was relieved that nobody got in trouble after all.

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