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 What Bordom Does To You!

Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
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Mon Mar 28, 2016 10:31 pm

What bordom Does To You


Bordom haunts you,

It's like a ghost that you can't get rid of.

Bordom controls you,

It makes you do stuff that you shouldn't,

To getting sassy,

To banging your your head againest the wall.

You can't get rid of bordom,

Because tied to you!

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