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 What do you think of my new story? :P

Joined: Tue May 14, 2013 1:39 pm
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Tue May 14, 2013 1:43 pm
A long time ago, when all the Kingdom Hearts and Final Fantasy characters were in kindergarten, little Ansem, whose favorite word was "darkness" (he was absolutely OBSESSED with darkness and all things evil) yelled "DARKNESS!" so loudly that he made his poor classmate Pence wet his pants; the entire class laughed loudly at this.

 Re: What do you think of my new story? :P

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Fri May 17, 2013 8:16 pm

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 Re: What do you think of my new story? :P

Joined: Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:01 pm
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Wed May 22, 2013 6:13 pm
heu this is adorablebrain54 you need to add more

 Re: What do you think of my new story? :P

Joined: Mon Aug 05, 2013 5:51 pm
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Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:57 pm
Please add a plot. I think this would be an awesome story!

 Re: What do you think of my new story? :P

Joined: Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:55 pm
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Sat Sep 14, 2013 1:41 am
I am thinking that maybe that would be a fun fanfiction, as turning it into anything else will probably result in a massive lawsuit. It would be adorable, though, to see the Disney/Square Enix cast in a kid AU. That'd be adorable and I'd read the heck out of that.

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