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 What people think of me

Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:07 pm
Posts: 57
Sun Oct 09, 2016 3:48 pm

People see me on the street

Try to avoid me

I don't know why

Then I go home

See the news

More terrosrist attacks

No. No. NO!

Don't they know what the Quran said?
"Whoever kills an innocent human being, it is as though he has killed all humanity, and whoever saves an innocent life, it is as though he has saved all humanity"

What have i done to these people?

Make them shun me

Cuss me in public

I'm Lucky for my friends

At night, secretly, I weep. Constantly weeping

Crying

For fear of what will happen the next day

A bombing? A shooting?

And then I creep downstairs

Silence in the darkness. 

The eyes of my cat loooking at me, as though he is saying

I will protect you.

I grab my quran. Read the arabic out of it.

Words and tears flow out of me.

Don't they know

I wouldn't harm a soul?

Wouldn't kill a person if my

own life depened on it.

No

They dont

END OF POEM

Thanks for reading that and please tell your friends and family don't be afraid. There's nothing to be afraid of. Help spread love and peace in our country where we're all afraid.




 Re: What people think of me
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Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 48
Mon Nov 14, 2016 6:55 am

I can really relate to this :) 

Really enjoyed reading it! Especially with hate and divide of the county, we do need to spread the message of love and peace. 




 Re: What people think of me

Joined: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:07 pm
Posts: 57
Fri Jun 16, 2017 6:44 pm

Thank you. I agree




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