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 Why? by GhostWolf ( It will make you question everything!)

Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
Posts: 68
Sun Apr 24, 2016 10:54 pm


                     By GhostWolf1798

Why do people show off,

To show there better,

Or to impress people?


Why do people fight,

Do they want to ruin there friendship?


Why do we question ourselves,

Can we really do it,

Or is our mind tricking us?


Why do we ask questions,

To prove something,

Or wonder about the unknown?

 Re: Why? by GhostWolf ( It will make you question everything

Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:21 am
Posts: 13
Wed Apr 27, 2016 2:45 am

this is so awesome can i use ur poems in my books please use them

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