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 Writing
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Joined: Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:17 pm
Posts: 65
Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:34 pm
Does anyone like to write?



 Re: Writing
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Sat Jun 03, 2006 2:58 pm
Posts: 637
Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:24 pm
I do! (hey that's so cool we both have the same icons!) (lol)



~pinklady



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Joined: Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:35 pm
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Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:42 pm
Having a good education
When you have a good education and you work hard you can be anything you want to be you can travel all over the world and get a good scholarship.
Hving a good education also means to believe in what you do and believe in you too!
When people have a good education they no where they are going and what they want to do when they grow up.Having a good education is very important because you learn and get ready for the things in life and you conquer your dreams.When people show they have a good education it tells someone they strive for what they believe in and is very serious about their grades.some people may not even think about getting a good education they probably just want to talk and play but they need to realize the important things in life and remeber they can do anything they put their mind too and that's what's having a good education means.



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Sep 20, 2006 9:50 am
Posts: 18
Wed Sep 20, 2006 10:04 am
toally! couldn't agree with u more!lol!



 Re: Writing
contributor

Joined: Thu Jul 20, 2006 1:13 am
Posts: 2781
Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:02 pm
i do!!!! but i have a lot to work on!!!!! i mean a LOT!!!!

bookmaster94
qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:42 pm
Posts: 2
Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:01 pm
I love to write....except I wish my school had a school news paper, that would be awesome...and i dont go to a middle school I go to private



Olivebaby101



 Re: Writing

Joined: Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:04 am
Posts: 33
Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:53 am
I love writing!



 Re: Writing

Joined: Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:04 am
Posts: 33
Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:54 am
I love writing! I consider the day wasted if I haven't written at least two pages on my comp by evening!lol.;)



 Re: Writing
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Mon May 15, 2006 5:07 pm
Posts: 678
Fri Oct 13, 2006 6:47 pm
OF COURSE! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?! I love writing!

Paige
paigeaniyah



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Oct 25, 2006 4:12 pm
Posts: 8
Wed Oct 25, 2006 4:32 pm
i 3 writing but i dont take that much time on it cuz im pretty busy but i luv to write on my comp



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:02 pm
Posts: 22
Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:04 pm


_T-Star_ wrote:
Does anyone like to write?


I only like to write sometimes but when my hand starts hurting i like to stop



 Re: Writing

Joined: Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:25 pm
Posts: 1
Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:29 pm
Hi ... I'm an education student in Melbourne Aust ... and built this site recently to encourage middle years writing. www.lightningbug.com.au

Some of you may find it useful?

Martin J



 Re: Writing
contributor

Joined: Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:50 pm
Posts: 2001
Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:19 pm
Of course! I practically live and breathe reading and writing.



 Re: Writing

Joined: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:29 am
Posts: 9
Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:43 pm
i used to go to a private catholic school for my elemaentary years. it was nice, but the office did the newletter and only gave it to parents



 Re: Writing
frequent_contributor

Joined: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:09 pm
Posts: 13338
Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:52 pm
Yeah, writing is cool, and fun!



 Re: Writing
regular_visitor

Joined: Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:45 pm
Posts: 143
Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:45 pm
Yes. I do.



 Re: Writing
visitor

Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:13 pm
Posts: 97
Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:11 pm
I DO!! I DO!! IF ANYONE ELSE DOES WE COULD START A WRITING CLUB!!!!!!!! COOL RIGHT??



 Who likes Hannah Montana (Miley/Destiny Cyrus)
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Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:13 pm
Posts: 97
Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:16 pm
Did you know Mily Cyrus' real name is Destiny? She changed it because her dad, Billy Ray Cyrus, called her "SMILEY" which led to "SMILEY MILY." So when she started showbusiness she used Miley as her name. Do you like/love Miley(Destiny)Cyrus(Hannah Montana)? Well at my school if you're a girl and don't like her well...you're weird everyone says. What is the point of faking it? I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE FAKE TO BE FRIENDS OR TRICK YOU! LAME! p.s. Friends should NOT FAKE it!



 Writing
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Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:13 pm
Posts: 97
Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:21 pm
Does anyone NOT like/love writing or reading.......



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Jun 06, 2007 10:55 am
Posts: 8
Wed Jun 06, 2007 11:11 am
i do it on my computer a lot too.



 Re: Writing
writeit_panelist

Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:10 pm
Posts: 293
Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:03 pm
Hi Bumblebee108,

Thanks for posting your mini-essay!

One thing I would definitely suggest is that you post it again in its own thread, so that people who are just scanning thread titles can see that it's here, instead of coming across it as they read through the responses to T-Star's post. You might try posting it on our General Chat - Post Work board.

Also, can you be more specific with your meaning? The phrase "a good education" is repeated seven times, without any alternative ways of saying it. Are you talking about finishing high school? Getting a degree or diploma? Educating yourself by watching people who are already successful and learning from them? Reading books about what you want to do, whether you're in school or not? All of the above? None of the above? Let the reader know, and then make sure that every one of your points/arguments makes sense in the context of your definition of "a good education."

Thanks again for posting, and take care!



 Re: Writing
writeit_panelist

Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:10 pm
Posts: 293
Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:06 pm
Hi, Writer (question mark omitted on purpose),

Do you mean that you don't have time to write a lot, or that you don't feel motivated or inspired, or that you have trouble finishing a piece once you start it? Clearly you've got some writing experience if you've written enough to know that you're good at it, but what exactly is it that you're letting hold you back from writing as much as you'd like to?



 Re: Writing
writeit_panelist

Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:10 pm
Posts: 293
Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:09 pm
Hi Longwriter123,

Wow, I'm impressed! It's rare for me to self-impose standards like that when it comes to the amount I write, unless whatever I'm working on has to be given to someone by a certain deadline -- that's great that you're so disciplined!

Keep up the good work...



 Re: Writing
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Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:13 pm
Posts: 97
Mon Jul 09, 2007 1:19 pm
 I love to write!! Only when I do my teacher never prints the whole thing just like the first and last page so there is no middle. I don't know why she doesn't print it. It makes me mad that my parents don't get to see all my work.



 Re: Writing

Joined: Fri Jul 13, 2007 5:24 pm
Posts: 3
Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:41 pm
I love to write too. Too much actually. I tend to write instead of do my homework and I used to write instead of doing my classwork. I got caught sometimes but I was pretty cautious. Some of best friends like to write too. They don't write as often as I do though.



 Re: Writing

Joined: Tue Dec 04, 2007 9:13 pm
Posts: 4
Tue Dec 04, 2007 9:17 pm
Writing is all I do i own about 16 different journals!



 Re: Writing

Joined: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:02 pm
Posts: 22
Tue Dec 04, 2007 10:04 pm
  • i do too but someties itstarts to hurt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



 re-Writing

Joined: Sat May 31, 2008 1:16 am
Posts: 2
Tue Jul 01, 2008 11:43 pm
Great tip thats the writer way:womanvery-happy:



 Re: Writing

Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:10 pm
Posts: 9
Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:08 am
I love to write if my hand starts to hurt I stop and either...
  • Think of more ideas for my new book
  • take a graph of what my family thinks I should write next
  • or shakee it out and start writing agian



 Re: Writing
visitor

Joined: Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:13 am
Posts: 42
Thu Nov 18, 2010 9:21 pm
I Heart Writing <3 !     !



 Re: Writing
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Joined: Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am
Posts: 2
Fri May 12, 2017 3:30 pm

I do!! Here's some of my work!! Not finished quite yet but, here's the begining of my story.

 

"Aaaahhhhhh!!!"

I was falling to the ground at a fast pace. I didn't know what was happening. My body hit the ground. I didn't feel any pain at all. This was weird. I  closed my eyes for just a second, I fell asleep almost at once.

 

"Emer McDalop."

 Why was someone saying my name?

"Hello?"

"Hello. You,Emer, have entered the world of Aopa. You were chosen out of eveyone in the world. And you will save our world. You will have to face some of the most dangerous creatures you've ever heard of. You will have to sacrifice some of your closest friends. You do all this, you will be able to save two worlds from the Gorvans."

"What? Who are you? Where are you?"

 A figure appeared in front of me. She looked like a Greek Goddess or something. She had milky white skin, long black braided braids in her hair. She wore a fushia v-neck dress that wet down to the ground.

"I am Savess. Goddess of Nature and Beauty."

"Where. Am I?"

 

 

So there it is The first chapter of   "Emer's Journey". Please comment on it and tell me where  It's good and bad!

                                                                 THANKS!heartsmileywinklaughcheekyyesenlightened




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