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Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
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Tue Mar 29, 2016 12:34 am

Your Home

 

Your home is your memory's stronghold,

Every room has a memory,

That will guide you forever.

 

Your home is a safe place,

It protects you,

From all who want to rob your belongings.

 

Your home is a hangout,

Where you play games,

To video games,

To board games with friends.

 

Your home is a place to love,

With friends and family,

Wherever you go.




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